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'shaping Our Nation'

Our India - An abode Of rich culture and tradition. Shaped by our ancestors - the moulds of our past Inspired by Freedom Fighters martyred wishing for a free Nation Led by leaders initiating missions to change the world, India is progressing.. Reaching out towards her goal Of being the country she was always meant to be - A haven of Harmony and Peace. * Jai Hind Written by Sneha RV Posted on 23/10/2015 For Broken Wings's 'Creative Layouts' Contest Form used - Shape The shape of the map of India: http://www.universallanguagessolution.com/uploads/2/8/6/2/28626567/514811_orig.jpg?1401503482 'Jai Hind' is a salutation, slogan and battle cry most commonly used in India in speeches and communications referring to patriotism towards India (Also known as Hind). It translates to "Hail India"/"Victory to India" or "Long live India".

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Skat A

Date: 5/13/2016 1:23:00 PM

Sneha, this was kind of confusing, THE SHAPE... however I did enjoy the lines, Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE

Anand Parmale

Date: 4/4/2016 4:40:00 AM

Congrats to you Sneha on your win for this beautiful poem.... Congrats for representing your nation India so well...Making me feel proud of my nation India.....

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/4/2016 2:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Jai Hind!! :) :)

Judy Konos

Date: 2/20/2016 7:56:00 AM

We are delighted that you are back...but in our hearts...YOU never left us!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2016 9:58:00 PM

this is interesting. LINDA

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:33:00 AM

Thank you!!

Judy Konos

Date: 1/25/2016 5:05:00 PM

Where did you go my favorite Literature Lover? I miss your charming self! And this poetry is stunning....so glad I read it....

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:34:00 AM

Hello, dear Judy!! I'm back.. Thank you so much for your support!! :D :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2016 2:43:00 PM

- A haven of Harmony and Peace ...... a beautiful place .... and a beautiful poem - Happy New Year, Sneha :) - And this is a winning poems, well deserved congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Anne Lise!! :D :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2015 2:15:00 PM

what a wonderful treat, sneha!... namaste and congrats.. huggs

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:35:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Nette!! :D :D

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2015 7:35:00 AM

my sincerest apology for coming back to you just now. Please forgive me. Again, my warm congratulations on this wonderful poem. It's my great pleasure to read it tonight. Thank you so much. God bless! Many hugs, Leonora

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2015 7:32:00 AM

I've many friends from India and they always tell me about its beauty and wonder, now I learned more about it from your stunning shape poem my dear friend, Sneha. I wish I can visit your wonderful country someday. Thank you so much for sharing and as I see below, this piece won. Congratulations for a deserving win! Hugs! Thank you so much as well for your very encouraging comments on my narwhal poem. I'm so sorry, I've missed reading your comment and (to be continued.)

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear Leonara!! I do hope you visit too!! (Sorry for the late reply!) :D :D

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2015 9:48:00 PM

Sneha, Wonderful win. SKAT

Sneha Rv
Date: 2/20/2016 2:36:00 AM

Thank you!! :D :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/26/2015 11:43:00 PM

wow.. very lovely praise of india..a winner for me, sneva.. huggs

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/26/2015 9:41:00 AM

Creatively patriotic, Sneha! Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/26/2015 1:17:00 AM

Congrats on superb win Sneha with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2015 7:29:00 PM

Love your title, your creative layout of your dear country and your inspirational poem, Sneha! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:44:00 PM

this one was one of my faves. Congrats to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 12:56:00 PM

Pleased to be back with congratulations, Sneha! Very merited. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2015 12:26:00 PM

Loved this Sneha - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2015 8:28:00 PM

this is a really cool idea, my friend. I think India would be a fascinating place to visit especially to meet with some of the lovely people like you I have met here

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/24/2015 6:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Andrea!! I hope you do visit sometime!! :D :D

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 3:32:00 PM

This is lovely, coming from the heart, and creative, too. The title "Shaping our Nation" is clever. Pride and glory are attributed to the motherland, despite any shortcomings:) Patriotism is to be lauded. Well done, Sneha. // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/24/2015 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Very glad you liked it!! :D :D

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2015 9:59:00 AM

WOW!!!!! hugs Jan xxx

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/24/2015 6:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Jan!! :D :D