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Shape Poem

I fell in love with a square He fell in love with me We got to know each other Shortly after I met his friends They took one look at me Then bursts into laughter Hurt words were said to me It was then in total shock My boyfriend laughed at me I said..we were never meant to be You go your way..I'll go mine A circle is meant for me.

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Donna Roberts

Date: 12/30/2016 4:16:00 PM

A sweet Treat!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/1/2017 5:25:00 PM

Hello Donna, I had fun writing this poem. This idea came to me in a dream. I had fun writing this poem. Happy New Year.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/18/2016 8:52:00 AM

Sounds like the square and his friends need some elasticity! Circles roll better and adapt to change more easily. I hope you find a circle to overlap with and a lot of smiles. Huggerlets ~ j

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/18/2016 9:56:00 AM

Hello jim'rikflats thank you for the complement Yes you are right a circle rolls better than a square.Circle do adapt better to change. I will look for your poetry.

The Brooklyn Six Project

Date: 11/17/2016 4:37:00 PM

Keep on writing Darlene. Love this here poem that you have.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/18/2016 9:59:00 AM

Thank you The Brooklyn Six Project I enjoy your poetry.I will be looking for your poems.Don't you ever stop writing either.

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 11/13/2016 8:43:00 AM

Darlene Email me at liveinfaithever1@gmail.com and we will talk about it I I will help you along the way De. Sam

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2016 3:28:00 PM

I just logged onto my Shape poem and saw your response so I have written down your e-mail address I will e-mail you. Thank you.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/13/2016 3:08:00 AM

There are so many reasons I love this poem, I just don't have the "character allowance" to list them all. This poem displays heart, soul, truth, confidence and a talent for poetry. I hope you keep writing so I can keep reading.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2016 3:20:00 PM

Hello Christy, nice to meet you.this poem displays heart,soul,truth,confidence and talent for poetry! Yes I will keep on writing. I enjoyed writing this poem.

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/10/2016 6:10:00 PM

better to find out the lack of character before this square turned into a prison

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2016 11:04:00 AM

Your right it is better to find out the character before the square turns into a prison. I agree my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/11/2016 10:50:00 AM

So true Frederic that is so true.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/10/2016 9:06:00 AM

Can't put a square peg in a round hole. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2016 2:28:00 PM

Hello Daniel, you are right you can not put a square hole into a round hole. I enjoy your poetry.

Chris Green

Date: 11/10/2016 8:50:00 AM

This was cute Darlene, sounds like a better circle of friends is needed. : )

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2016 2:31:00 PM

Hello Chris,thank you for your comment. Yes a better circle is needed. I also enjoy your poetry.