Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - LIFETIME Premium Member Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled SHAKY RELIANCE which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Best Olive Eloisa Guillermo Poems

+ Fav Poet


he said: i'm a woman of steel...
he doesn't know this a fraud seal...
my heart and soul on a "hill"..
wishing nothing but complete heal...

i have long live to love..
knowing, these all wants to have..
i have taken so many risks..
fallen unwavering to various tricks..

i am not a materialistic..
nor am i a someone plAtonic..
i got heart small not gigantic..
yet, it beats huge with ethics..

i fought hard within hot waters..
seeking fortresses, guarding to buffer..
i conquering with God who gives power..
no less, success it yonder...


i don't want to be on defiance
though, i am of silence
appearing tough and of calmness..
tell you what, inside is a shaky reliance.

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 4:51:00 PM
    The reliance you crave is enlightening Olive. I'm not materialistic either, just the wanting of a happy life. Not a lot ot ask for to be honest, James :)

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Beautifully written. ...I feel your emotions in this poem of yours...lovely

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/22/2014 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for reading my poems and leaving a comment.. :)