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Shadows Trail To the Afterglow

In the darkest she danced blissfully, The moon did glow, yet hearts cried. Yes young maiden rest now peacefully, In the shadow she danced blissfully Unaware now, these trains passed, As she danced, the penumbra lied, In the darkest she danced blissfully, The moon did glow, yet hearts cried.
_________________________ For nette's contest: "In the Afterglow"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/23/2011 10:04:00 PM
Night magic can bring on the tears as your sweet verse shows.
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 6:48:00 AM
congrats. tim.. you did so well.. come visit my shadorma poem; have something for you! :) huggs,. nette
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Tim
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:50:00 PM
Tim, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation.. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Tim on your top ten win in Nette's contest luv.with this exquisite entry luv..
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:01:00 PM
Lunar, love, light and sadness in this fine piece Tim. I think Nette will love this piece. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:41:00 PM
Andrea is right, I have not tried this form either... But you my friend have done it just perfectly... a proud piece you have here... enjoyed...Michael
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:26:00 PM
I like this, Tim. Some people are not doing true triolets and It's so nice to see someone who is not butchering the form. Wonderful!
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:10:00 PM
really enjoyed this one. sorry it took me so long to get back to you, thank you for commenting on my poetry, but i hurt my back, it still hurts to sit very long.
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Date: 8/5/2011 11:46:00 PM
Wowsers! I loved the reference to the moon. I think good poetry comes from the moon's influence. Great Work!!
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