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Shadows

I'm not the man I thought I was I'm but a shadow seen because A soulless light from somewhere shines Lit by thieves in looted shrines And kept alive by evil deeds Done by men with evil needs So who am I if not this me What other self could myself be If lit by light shone from within Unsullied by this world I'm in Perhaps a man born of free will Who did not have the need to kill In order to maintain the lie That a shadow does not die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2015 9:58:00 PM
:), Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:05:00 PM
Hi Steven:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/16/2015 12:20:00 AM
STEVEN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/16/2015 2:59:00 AM
hi linda, thankyou kindly
Date: 3/15/2015 4:13:00 PM
Steven:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/15/2015 5:22:00 PM
thank you kindly skat i'm honoured
Date: 3/8/2015 10:29:00 AM
Your work shouts out, what is usually whispered, a list of heart rendering shadows on the soul that breed heartache and despair. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/3/2015 8:17:00 PM
Shades of Shakespeare in this masterful sonnet, Steven. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on'The Last Chapter'. Elaine
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/3/2015 10:10:00 PM
thankyou for your kind comment elaine. we all stand in bill's shadow
Date: 2/28/2015 8:52:00 PM
Steven, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/1/2015 9:03:00 PM
don't know how i managed it linda but see above for my reply to your lovely comment
Date: 2/27/2015 9:54:00 PM
Steven, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/1/2015 8:31:00 PM
thnx skat and thankyou for your warm welcome. most of my poems were written a long time ago and i'm working back thru them for posting. i'm just a writer of poems and stories who became a little disillusioned but only because i took myself too seriously. i guess its a solitary pastime with social implications and i, like all of you, enjoy it greatly.
Date: 2/24/2015 6:22:00 AM
Dark. Deep. Perfect rhyme. I hope thought that this is fiction. Even if it's not, always, there is hope. Faith, hope and love is constant. Just reach out, answer will be found. A 7. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Steven. Smiles. :D Kim
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/1/2015 8:18:00 PM
thnx kim, and thankyou for welcoming me to the soup. no it is not fiction but it is a bit of a dig at the powers that be.

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