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"shadows"

The second time around seems harder. Perhaps slogging through the heavy air, or seeking that old fire casts over everything a dim, dark pallor. Past victories gained have been broken. Reclaiming new footing, and stalking rougher higher peaks and eddies vies with anticipated promises and fortune. Third time may be much brighter. Surely the lot revolutions, turns wheels to a completely fresh canvas? Sweeps away cobwebs and traps something righter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/2/2010 5:31:00 AM
Well written Sasha, much to think about.. Also thanks for your sweet comments also.. Michael
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:46:00 PM
I like your poem, like the sounds
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