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Shadows, Rather You Look Or See

The rain falls from the sky In an invisible haze, striking the Pond that is brown and green. This is a clear air I breathe and I am walking as love walks, with A shadow, not invisible, though Lighter than the soft rain, Constant as time that follows, It appears and disappears Like a dream that is turned away, Not knowing how to return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:23:00 AM
Michael, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Michael East
Date: 7/16/2016 7:12:00 PM
Linda, I feel lucky to be here- Your are one of the featured poets in the 100 best, I would be honored to be your poet friend-you know I do not have many poet friends, if any. Yes I will be reading your poems- read some before I joined-liked what I saw.
Date: 7/15/2016 1:03:00 AM
Michael, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Michael East
Date: 7/15/2016 4:25:00 PM
Oh SKAT! You are so nice to say so, I thank you a thousand times for you time spent reading me.

Book: Shattered Sighs