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Shadow Dancing

I'll go dancing with my shadow It keeps such perfect step with me Dips and sways and follows Were a perfect match you see The timing has to be just right Afternoon or early evening best My figure so perfectly outlined The setting sun creates the rest My shadow knows me well It always hides my salty tear Dancing- just the two of us Until my true love does appear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/18/2013 8:25:00 AM
nice one, barbara! congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2013 6:42:00 AM
Very sweet piece, congratulations
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Date: 7/17/2013 10:45:00 PM
Unique and lovely. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:34:00 PM
A delightful write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:26:00 PM
Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:21:00 PM
Barbara,Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/17/2013 9:57:00 AM
Very nicely done and congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:02:00 AM
Oh yes Barbara!...'Shadow Dancing' is the perfect title for this gem...The last verse just floored me...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:07:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Great unique work that you have created...Enjoyed reading this day..I hope all is well with you..Sara
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