Shadow

In the shadow of great parents.

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/19/2010 10:08:00 PM

this is a great poem! in the shadow of great parents, divine parents for a divine child is a love without force. its through the spirit rahter than blood. even if they pass.or aren't there. love this.i found it closing my eyes and clicking on one in the moment. and im happy i did.i realized, in some ways, we are somehwhat alike, have you noticed that Sara? in a way. -Always&Forever Lynette

Kakraba Afful

Date: 1/8/2010 2:55:00 PM

That makes you an epic.

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/27/2009 9:51:00 AM

My sentiments exactly Sara...I had great parents as well...Well done in such few words...Bravo....God Bless...Taz

Danny Nunn

Date: 12/22/2009 5:05:00 PM

A very good way to put in fine words,,,good write..Thanks for "Fess up" I agree...on Judgment, there wont be any lawyers to bail out the crooks...just the Judge and the person..Happy Holidays..Danny

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/22/2009 4:58:00 PM

good one

John Freeman

Date: 12/21/2009 3:52:00 PM

Such a blessing it is to be in the shadow of great parents, for sure,Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/21/2009 10:33:00 AM

We all are, one love

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/20/2009 12:09:00 PM

A wonderful epigram you have penned here. SO few words that carry much meaning! Thanks so much for sharing. Many thanks too for taking the time to read my writes and your kind comments are deeply appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2009 9:06:00 AM

Nice epigram ... enjoyed all these new forms of poetry which the sponsors encourage for the contests... I especially like this epigram... I had great parents so I can totally relate and I think they would be proud of me as their "shadow".. at least I hope they would if they were still alive... enjoyed so much and thankxxx for your continued comments of kindness and support.. ..happy Sunday.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/20/2009 8:11:00 AM

This is very profound, Sara! It tells so much in six short words! A great entry to the contest!~ Love, Carrie