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Shades Away

From afar your coat Is black as magic, And I can’t help but see you With a wand and crystal ball Impervious to fate. Closer, that black is the deep blue Of ocean on the horizon; Right before me but Too far to swim to touch Without drowning in riptide. Your hair is infinitely blacker Than fabric or night skies could aspire. It clashes with your collar Where the strands shag over, But your eyes when they turn To mine Have almost faded black to blue And put up no such fight. I long to smooth your ruffled Raven feathers, Swim into your eyes and find You the blackest calmest trench of sea— But the chance remains, You’ll fly away Before I can even Breathe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/25/2009 4:40:00 PM
This is breathtakingly beautiful. What can I say? Who can stand up to that final stanza of genius? Love, Sara:)
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Date: 10/21/2009 8:58:00 AM
This is a fantastic write Katie. Thank you so much for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 5:18:00 PM
Sorry I've been distant from the site for so long guys! School started and it has been rather demanding. But my muse is gradually finding chances to come out again :) Katie
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