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Sexy Haiku

legs long and curvy a waterfall's sensual pain.... tongues bring release Written by Seren Roberts 11/11/2012

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Date: 2/19/2017 2:23:00 PM
woohoo you should put this in Richards sexy haiku contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:47:00 AM
hey Seren sexy indeed...David
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Date: 11/17/2012 11:42:00 PM
Thanks David.
Date: 11/17/2012 12:40:00 AM
Like Ruben says-speachless, can't get any sexier than this, Seren:) Jag
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Date: 11/17/2012 3:25:00 AM
well done on your win, hmmm me thinks yours was sexier than mine. Still smiling over the comments though.....Seren
Date: 11/14/2012 5:06:00 AM
expect a this one u r done..u hve to get it..thumb up
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Date: 11/14/2012 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Tim ....Seren
Date: 11/13/2012 4:25:00 PM
Dreamy & steamy, nice one Seren....
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Date: 11/14/2012 11:35:00 AM
Thanks James, the comments have cracked me up laughing. Seren
Date: 11/13/2012 11:09:00 AM
I'm perspiring profusely! YIKES!
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Date: 11/13/2012 5:27:00 PM
was waiting for your comment Jack lol u didnt disappoint me...Seren
Date: 11/12/2012 9:00:00 AM
yes ,yes ,yes,lol,nice write Seren
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:32:00 PM
Lol Richard have changed a word. Merits another yes I think.....Seren
Date: 11/12/2012 5:46:00 AM
ahhhhh I love the Haiku and sweet images that follow.. hugs Michael
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Date: 11/12/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Michael. ...Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 5:45:00 PM
why would you want 2 re-look your haiku.. I love the sexy image you got going here. Well I'm not gonna look tooo long... LOL...I'm a female... But, the waterfalls, makes a good fall that screams OUCH!... xox~ the best of luck...pd
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:41:00 AM
Thanks pd .... Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 4:39:00 PM
Good luck in the contest~SKAT~
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM
lol Skat, thing this has caused a stir.....Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 4:28:00 PM
oh, now I see why all the comments!!! steamy steamy
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM
omg Andrea I dont know what to say....Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 3:13:00 PM
I like your sexy haiku, hope you have time to read my sexy haiku Seren. - - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:23:00 PM
Sure will Anne Lise ... Good luck.... Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 11:26:00 AM
WOW Seren, you past steamy, now inferno. Rollo
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:51:00 AM
well a waterfall is quite a great place etc etc etc. ... Seren
Date: 11/11/2012 11:22:00 AM
now,,this is sexy... Seren, good luck in the contest...pd
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:51:00 AM
imeant rollo's reply for you, now i am embarrassed ... Seren
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