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Set You Free

I'd turn the pages on the past, steal your pain away. Find that moment love first kissed you, in our better day. Save you from this tarnish that has come to be. Erase the very memories and all you know of me. I'd leave you in your happiness, to live a better life. cursing all those words I said that cut you like a knife. Watched your freedom for a time, in our final hour and kill the very existence of the way I turned things sour. I'd do this for you if I could, that I hope you see. Yet I'm learning the greatest way to show my love... is to set you free.

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Date: 7/25/2020 8:56:00 AM
To put the feelings of your love first is the kind of unconditional love we all seek. This is very beautiful Jesse. Blessings
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/26/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, I only can say that I'm glad thus far not to have to fulfill such words and let someone go that I love. Though I've felt in times of argument that it may come to pass. I know my relationship is healthy.
Date: 7/24/2020 12:24:00 PM
Oh my goodness... Truly beautiful.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/26/2020 9:33:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/22/2016 8:20:00 AM
Wow! This is an inspiring Poem of yours! Even though its hard to do it, You need it because of love. :(
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 6/22/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. It's one of those situations no one wants to be in. So it's gut-wrenching.
Date: 6/20/2016 7:37:00 PM
Jesse, this is really beautiful! You're a very good writer. Setting someone free is the hardest thing to do.. but sometimes ... you're right, it's sometimes the best way to show your love.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 6/20/2016 9:59:00 PM
being told you're a good writer by someone who has poems that are ranked in high regard, it's a true honor. Thank you so much, Becca.
Date: 6/20/2016 3:18:00 PM
I haven't been on Poetry Soup and for some reason I logged on. I found your poem....it tugs at my heart. Z
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 6/20/2016 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Zoria. I like to write when I'm feeling emotional. It tends to be then that I write things I reread and realize I actually kind of like my own work. This poem is personal, it tugs at my heart as well.

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