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serinity,complexitivity

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serinity,complexitivity

My sactuary is 
my only turf 
my weakness..
is the weakness 
of my own 
personality
serinity and 
calmness flow 
through me
yet you do not 
know what rakes 
within
has life and yet 
takes no form
A dullness not i 
can comprehend
unsettleness of 
the mind and soul
And a churning 
of the brain.

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  1. Date: 10/5/2009 8:57:00 AM
    excellent,,complex view of your serenity,welcome to poetry soup-Charma

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 5:29:00 AM
    very rough the place you've decided to dwell, not a place for comapny, decide to dwell elsewhere Light & Love..and it is a very good verse! Perhaps you can try to write me a verse in your own dialect so folks can hear what music the word makes in Botswana!

  1. Date: 9/12/2009 8:05:00 PM
    Good poem.

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 6:47:00 AM
    Good poetry.

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 4:30:00 PM
    I think we all here have some churning going on in our brains. Writing helps. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Hi Welcome to PS! We have a few newcomers here today. Come on in and make yourself feel right at home. You'll love it here I'm sure. Good people here. Love your poem. I think we all can relate to your heartfelt sentiments here. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 4:06:00 PM
    Interesting! Welcome to the soup! Title/ serenity..Light & Love