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Serinity,Complexitivity

My sactuary is my only turf my weakness.. is the weakness of my own personality serinity and calmness flow through me yet you do not know what rakes within has life and yet takes no form A dullness not i can comprehend unsettleness of the mind and soul And a churning of the brain.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/5/2009 8:57:00 AM

excellent,,complex view of your serenity,welcome to poetry soup-Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2009 5:29:00 AM

very rough the place you've decided to dwell, not a place for comapny, decide to dwell elsewhere Light & Love..and it is a very good verse! Perhaps you can try to write me a verse in your own dialect so folks can hear what music the word makes in Botswana!

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/12/2009 8:05:00 PM

Good poem.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/7/2009 6:47:00 AM

Good poetry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2009 4:30:00 PM

I think we all here have some churning going on in our brains. Writing helps. Keep writing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 9/6/2009 4:11:00 PM

Hi Welcome to PS! We have a few newcomers here today. Come on in and make yourself feel right at home. You'll love it here I'm sure. Good people here. Love your poem. I think we all can relate to your heartfelt sentiments here. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/6/2009 4:06:00 PM

Interesting! Welcome to the soup! Title/ serenity..Light & Love