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Sequence-The Perfumed Garden

Scents to mingle in summer heat, Jasmine,Honeysuckle, bittersweet. The perfumed petals ,paperwhite first intoxicate,then delight. Lilies waxing in summer light A heady fragrance to fill the night

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Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 10/6/2008 12:03:00 AM

What a beautiful poem! After reading it I took a sniff without even thinking about it and sure enough I smelt the flowers. Thanks, Nathaniel

Deneen White

Date: 9/30/2008 4:48:00 PM

I can smeel it from here with the power of your write, it smells heavenly, take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/30/2008 8:56:00 AM

Your words bring such beautiful images and fragrance to life. Truly outstanding. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/29/2008 8:18:00 PM

Now that just sounds like a wonderful mix of fragrances to me - God Bless Brian

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 9/29/2008 8:36:00 AM

I can smell them! I recall the smell of jasmine in Hawaii - nothing like it in the world!

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/29/2008 6:47:00 AM

Wow. this is good i could smell them slipping away to winter. in the suns heat. john

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 9/29/2008 5:39:00 AM

I could smell the beautiful odors. Great crystalline.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/29/2008 3:49:00 AM

Gorgeous, Brian!!! What a delightful scent this poem creates, beautiful! Love Kristin