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Sentiments of A Woman Everyone has sentiments, we all know that, but a woman's sentiments are sometimes hidden. She can pretend to be happy, when she is really blue. A woman's sentiments are very deep, within her heart and soul. She can hide her feelings very well. You can not tell, by looking at her - how much love, or pain she has endured. A woman has to be strong, like a super woman. She has to pretend that eveerything is alright - when it's not. She does all this for her family. At night when she lays her head on the pillow - she cries. She prays and thanks God for letting her get through one more day....
02/15/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/23/2014 8:42:00 PM
So true . . . Enjoyed my visit to your work.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/24/2014 12:14:00 AM
Thank you Faye, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/23/2014 10:14:00 AM
True woman she is indeed, I feel. A nice message it's without any doubt you have given, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/21/2014 6:43:00 AM
Insightful and heartfelt. Sometimes life does that to a woman, it is never as bad if they cannot see her cry.
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Date: 2/20/2014 1:31:00 AM
A deeply reflective and thoughtful write. It makes me realize once again how difficult, if not impossible, it is for me to know the heart of a woman. But then, I do not even know myself all that well because negative experiences have clouded whatever it is that I might have become without them.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/20/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem. I just write about what I have seen or about my own expirences. There are some pretty good men out there too. Let's just say that we need each other.
Date: 2/19/2014 5:49:00 PM
this tells me that what i worry about i have even more to worry about. i dont want a woman crying about my problems but i can point out the women that probably do.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/19/2014 8:39:00 PM
Hi John; Sometimes women hide their feelings so they don't worry their husband or family.There are men that worry too, but some women go through a lot in this life.
Date: 2/19/2014 12:28:00 PM
Yes as a woman we hold so much within ourselves to make other around us happy. A wonderful poem. love phyl
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/19/2014 5:36:00 PM
Hi Phyllis; I am so glad that you liked the poem. maybe not all women are like that, but most of them are.
Date: 2/18/2014 10:15:00 PM
Yes much is hidden for the happiness of others in a selfless woman and man...great one lucilla...have a good week...
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/19/2014 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Donna, for your kind words.
Date: 2/18/2014 12:38:00 PM
Nicely penned inspirational write Lucilla..
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/19/2014 5:37:00 PM
Hi Ken, thank you for the visit. Check with you soon.
Date: 2/18/2014 3:13:00 AM
A woman gave birth to me . Every day of my life I rose from my bed and went downstairs to be greeted by my mother and 5 elder sisters , So I did learn very quickly to appreciate women and all they bring into this world of ours. They never understood the agonies of man flu but I still wouldn't trade a day of my childhood memories of the women in my life for all the gold in the world.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/18/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Darren for such a nice comment. My poem does not mean that all women are like this,but a lot that I knew have gone through a lot. A real mother that cares will do anything foe her family. I am glad that you understand...
Date: 2/17/2014 11:38:00 AM
Hi Lucilla a nice piece about the female strength, lots of men are the same...David
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/17/2014 5:24:00 PM
Yes David; you are so right. There are a lot of good men out there.
Date: 2/16/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Lucilla, it is so true what you write here - I will hang it on the wall in front of all men .... maybe they will someday understand a woman .... do you think? - Thank you my friend. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/17/2014 5:27:00 PM
Thank you AnneLise. A lot of us women have to put up with a lot through out our lives.
Date: 2/16/2014 9:17:00 AM
I don't understand this. The women I have been associated with during my nearly seventy-six years on this earth had no problem letting me know exactly how they felt. I'm certainly not saying there aren't some women who stifle their feelings, but all women?
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/16/2014 9:44:00 AM
Hi Jerry; You are right, not all women are like that - the same as not all men are bad either, but as human beings we make mistakes and sometimes wind up with the wrong person. Now days it is hard to find a good man, or woman, but they are out there. I know - tjhanks for reading.
Date: 2/16/2014 7:51:00 AM
great piece on the burden borne daily by women worldwide. Who shall hear her softly sobbing.in bed to wake up in the morning with her protective smile on her face. well written Lucilla . Andy Lyle
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/16/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Robert for such a nice comment. As I told Jerry not all are like that, but a lot of the ones I know are, including me.
Date: 2/15/2014 11:06:00 PM
Wow, your feelings are spread all throughout this write my friend! I felt your soul deep withing this creative poem this evening! What a glorious piece, straight from the heart...Great Work!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/16/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Russell. You always give me such nice comments. God bless you and I'll catch you later.
Date: 2/15/2014 10:23:00 PM
What a lovely poem! Shall I write the mens version? I think some of us men and women, suffer more than others as we feel life's burdens not only ours but all of mankinds, such is the tender heart.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/16/2014 9:55:00 AM
Hi Arthur; Yes, yes I do believe that you should write something on this. We are not all good, we are not all bad either. blessings...
Date: 2/15/2014 9:29:00 PM
this is so lovely, you have captured the soul of many women!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/15/2014 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, glad you enjoyed it. After reading your poem - I felt like writing one too, but i can not enter any contests. Not for a long time. I don't know why. i do everything they say, but still - nothing happens. Good night.... Lucilla
Date: 2/15/2014 6:41:00 PM
Oh! yes Lucilla I agree with everything you have said in that poem, so true and if anyone should know I should, very well written. Vera
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/15/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am glad that you liked it. Tell me - are you Peters" wife, or someone new? Many blessings.... Lucilla
Date: 2/15/2014 3:30:00 PM
a wise write Lucilla nailed to perfection Kudos love it hugs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/15/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Shadow for such nice words.

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