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Sensual Fool

I know how it started in a lonely sort of way, wanting so bad to have a new day!!! You came unexpectedly an didn't defeat ..I wasn't so sure if we should even meet..!! I wasn't attracted to you at first....but the sound of your voice gave me no choice!! Little did I know that you war a mask!!! An the battle had begun for you to complete your task!!! That you would get what you wanted at any cost..! That Maybe So,but you are Lost!!!

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/25/2014 9:50:00 AM

deep powerful piece of writing nina what a well put feeling love how you drew this

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/24/2014 8:03:00 PM

Very deep and bordering on the dark Nina! It could be relationship gone bad don't know. A pleasure to read you my dear friend. :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.

Ninette Carey
Date: 11/24/2014 9:05:00 PM

Thank you for the Love an Hugs... Dorian.. So needed!! Xo

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2014 6:21:00 PM

very deep and dark and I find the ending quite fascinating! I think there is a lot more to tell! Hugs jan xx

Ninette Carey
Date: 11/24/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thank you !! Still waiting for my happy ending!! Xo

Joel Thornton

Date: 11/24/2014 6:00:00 PM

nice write. Curiously I wonder.. are you willing to share the circumstances surrounding the composition of this poem? If so I would be interested in hearing it. =) ~Joel

Ninette Carey
Date: 11/24/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Joel !! To vile to put to paper!! The dark side is never pleasant for long!! Xo