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Senryu 011

a little sin takes the short cut to damnation... babe it’s cold outside. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2012 7:45:00 PM

I got blankets... nice one.. pd

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/23/2012 6:11:00 AM

soup

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/21/2012 12:45:00 PM

Oh yes. and i can feel it. good work. Merry Christmas and thanks for reading Another Tragedy. Many blessings. Lucilla

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 12/21/2012 7:42:00 AM

Clever Harry! I am smiling here! Cynthia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2012 3:18:00 PM

wow... Harry, hope you got the key... a good senryu...pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2012 6:16:00 PM

There must be a contest going on..Reads like a winner to me..Sin can ruin one's life for sure..Enjoyed reading this truth filled work this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work about "Rooster Feet and Dumplings"..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2012 4:39:00 PM

well crafted, harry!! Keep them coming. I am hungry for more of your poetry to see. Always am happy that you enjoy a sonnet of mine. LUv, Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2012 1:54:00 PM

A very well written Senryu, Harry. - You will be forgiven. - I hope Christmas will be blessed time for you and your family. - / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/19/2012 1:30:00 PM

Oh so true! Some wise words here Harry..Thanks for always stopping by. :o)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/19/2012 1:04:00 PM

I always imagined that it would be hot. The answer to your question Harry is Money. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Rollo West

Date: 12/19/2012 12:28:00 PM

Hi Harry, what a great Senryu, really enjoyed reading it. Rollo

Daver Austin

Date: 12/19/2012 10:44:00 AM

That little sin could mean a hot time, eh, Harry. Love it. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/19/2012 10:10:00 AM

ha like this, xx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/19/2012 9:44:00 AM

Yes, a little sin can separate us from God. And it is COLD. Great write, Harry. Love ya, Toquyen

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/19/2012 8:17:00 AM

Very touched harry, great senryu :D

David Williams

Date: 12/19/2012 7:37:00 AM

ha ha, Harry very good....David