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Senryu 001

Now is the hour
when we must say goodbye...
dagger drives deep.

© Harry J Horsman 2012  

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:14:00 AM
    That is a very serious goodbye...Enjoyed reading..I hope not your life but just a work expressing the idea of lovers no longer in love parting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:41:00 AM
    intense again harry xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:03:00 PM
    whoaaa. A dangerous one!!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:11:00 PM
    harry, thanks for you comment. I do laugh a lot! This poem is short. So it leaves room for interpretation. Is it just the pain of a temporary goodbye, a death or a breakup? These are the questions I ask myself. This is a pleasure to think about. Great job.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:36:00 PM
    Wow...this is intense. Really good. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my "Sweet Visions" poem. It was my first imagism. Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:06:00 PM
    Intresting, I think I will stay away from this guy, at least for the next hour or so.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:23:00 PM
    Wow. Such a great impact this one was for me. You certainly get under the skin of the reader--please dont...stab me...? *innocent smile* :D Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Who drove the dagger deep...Anyway, don't get killed, my friend, we need you for other senryu!:) Great write! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:59:00 AM
    This is a loaded one, Harry... it makes me wonder what the story could be behind this-- almost like a suspense novel or movie in my mind. definitely a different way to say goodbye...I hope you are having a good weekend!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:35:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful senryu my dear friend Harry. I love it so much 'though the feeling here is sad. For me, no saddest word other than goodbye. Two thumbs up for a great write! Thanks for sharing and your precious time visiting my work especially my first poem. Thanks a lot for your nice comments too. Belated Happy and Fruitful Thanksgiving Day to you and your family! love and hugs, Leonora