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Senility

Senility The mumblings of day’s gone bye A living memory of a life ending Unable to recapture the joy of time and place The meanderings of a mind wandering, Through labyrinths of jumbled memories. The treasures of a lifetime soon exposed; Silent, tolerant nods, as heads turn away Not understanding the inner cry for recognition A life well spent, vulnerable now to senility and time. Shaking, sagging, arthritic creaking bones, Holding within the tears and joys of yesteryear. Childhood with its anticipation, grasping for life. The fruitless dreams of idealistic youth, The reality of living, the striving to survive. Tired old eyes that tell of tragedy and hope, Mumblings of faded memories and shattered dreams; Family, friends, passed away, forgotten ones alive, In a shoe box of memorabilia, of all that used to be; Faded photos, letters, cards, a child’s lock of hair. Faces constantly dutifully drifting in and out, Strangers attending, no time for understanding, To offer solace to the remnants of a life already spent. In the midst of living, why are we so unaware? How delicately life is balanced, years set all awry In the ramblings of a bag of bones, senility and time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/20/2011 2:11:00 PM
You have described old age perfectly. I'm 82 and can fit into each and every ailment, but I keep busy, writing poetry, playing the Bach unaccompanied Sonatas and Partitas for violin, and I have a wonderful family of kitties. Ah, but there are times...............Congrats on this fine piece being selected. daver
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Lizzie. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:17:00 PM
old age comes bounding down the street, kookas laugh the challenge meet, but life is mostly surely sweet , no mate i'm not a dying:) birds do tweet... the chickens are a flying ...
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:54:00 AM
I really like the honesty and melancholy of this- actually sums up what I've been trying to convey in most of my poetry! Beautifully constructed too
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lizzie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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