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Self Pity

Alive this night, I try to be While candle flickers on display The room, prison, my lock, no key My bed, my life, in disarray My thoughts, unsure, they hold no weight The phone, its ring, no tone, no sound My family, gone, they left with hate So left, in tears, to one day drown But yet, die not, I am still here Thinking, long and hard, still no clue Can’t bring them back, the ones held dear So this, my life, I’m left to rue What is this man supposed to do? My life, is death, this much is true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 6:14:00 AM
Deep thoughts of self pity. Intense. Good write Michael
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Date: 2/13/2009 2:38:00 AM
Very very sad. Self pity is a killer, in every way, very beautifully written love Kristin
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Date: 2/12/2009 1:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful Sonnet Michael. The emotions throughout this are so deep and touches the heart to read. He is still there and where there is life, there is hope! Awesome write! love, Robin
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:25:00 AM
Wow....really great poem..it speaks to me
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:09:00 AM
A sad reflection Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:22:00 AM
Wow Michael this poem is just heart wrenching because I myself have worn those shoes many times over the course of what is known as my life - Keep your head up and stay strong inside bro - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:06:00 AM
Oh Michael this hurts my heart to read. Each phrase spills out pain. Laurie
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:48:00 AM
I am sure many can relate to this write. Family values gone, torn apart, lonely is everywhere but no one to talk to. Sad, alone, and asking why, I have seen this happen to many, and it all comes down to the choices we make....always, Christy
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