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Seeking Peace In Cold Gush

With downpour hued in starlit gray, And fallen eyes are interlocked In drizzles where the torrent bites Till candles wane on fabric soiled (As evening slips its frail chemise). Her boudoir cluttered by the wind, Sighing a pitter-patter scream (Old woman dwells on passing sprees) And on a chair, her drooped spine curves, (To track hazed lifetime’s reveries); Receding off so constantly. Heels tip tap rhythm on the floor; Alone, betrothed to lonely sheets (Entrusting stars for pain’s release). How cold the gush in Summer's flight. ...................... For Craig Cornish’s Intermingle Contest --------------------- Inspired by poems” How Cold The Gush"-- 5/25/2013 and “ Seeking Evening's Peace-- 11/17/2013 ............ by nette onclaud

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:42:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:47:00 PM
Wonderfully intermingled poems, Nette. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:12:00 PM
You have intermingled two gorgeous poems, to make a longer, even more tender and delicate story! So lovely!
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/8/2015 8:58:00 AM
Hello my dear friend Nette! This is a very creative write and it's my great honor and pleasure to read it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing & good luck always!.BTW, did you read my soup mail? I hope so, pls. bear with the last part for some typo error there cz my internet went super duper slow. I'm stopping by here to say thank you once again for your precious time. I'll be back one of these days 'coz I'm not done yet w/ f.exam & research study assigned to us. God Bless! love lots, Leo
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:11:00 PM
great way of intermingling Nette I love the flow and imagery gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:49:00 PM
Hi Nette! I looked at the contest rules and found them quite complicated. You made it look so easy though. Creative interplay...Hugs! Kim :D
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:43:00 PM
Dear Nette, Love the visual effects in this write of yours It's imagery of words is quite remarkable, enjoyed it throughly my friend and thank you for your comments on my star treck poem, cheri
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Date: 3/5/2015 2:26:00 PM
The certain mystique of this astounding poem beguiles me. I love journeying with you away from the ordinary tracks of live. Hats off to you, Nette
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Date: 3/5/2015 2:17:00 PM
You did a really good job of intermingling! That was sure an interesting contest. Check Soupmail!!
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Date: 3/5/2015 1:42:00 PM
Always such beauty in your words. :o)
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Date: 3/5/2015 1:19:00 PM
Great intermingling of your poems Nette Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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