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Inspired by Olive Eloisa Guillermo's poetry contest: "I am Not Ashamed of The Gospel"

Once upon a time, I believed that earthly men held felicity keys Myriad of joy one special someone would woo me to rely on But soft whispers serendipitous of grace, I heard with ease Steep in thought, I surely had reached zenith of my reflections. At times I lived and breathe guilt. Passage of my life held stripes Alone before inner mirror, my muse hushed, as I turned within Sensing some celestial being so near, it cast light on daylight I saw that putting earthly man before my Creator was a sin. All I'd ever known: dread, toil, woe, they all turned symphony Tranquility saturated my soul as I reached for my telephone Hugged my new found thought; epitome of gift above any Then in dulcet tone, I asked for the nearest SDA church to my home. Enraptured Sabbath was a day away, I breathe that spring, anew For "Seek Ye First..." resonated, and "No Man Cometh..." coalesce I would take Him at His promises; but Jesus, to me, was Catalyst overdue Tears cascaded sans shame; blessings began to flow as though a test. I called down South to family, and shared epiphany I've had I would yield, volunteer, give thanks and life praises to my God I shredded fear and found fresh spark that made me glad My life became a constant advent season, as I look up to God. "Seek ye first the kingdom of God, and his righteousness; and all these things shall be added unto you." (Matthew 6:33) "No man cometh unto the Father, but by me." (John 14:6) (Entry for Olive Eloisa Guillermo's 14-20 lines poetry contest: 'I am Not Ashamed of The Gospel)

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Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 PM
Iris, thank you for the reply to my comment. LINDA
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/4/2016 10:25:00 AM
Quite welcome dear one. Have a lovely day.
Date: 2/3/2016 6:46:00 AM
Not only congratulations on your win, but congratulations on a beautiful statement of your faith in God. He is indeed the only god worthy of our praise and confidence. He will not fail; He cannot fail. Love the title.
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thank you dear one. Agree and amen.
Date: 2/3/2016 3:26:00 AM
Iris, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:52:00 PM
Did I now. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 1/30/2016 3:39:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Iris.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/31/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma. My Great Aunt once said, "When you do poetry, make sure God is in it."
Date: 1/29/2016 10:30:00 AM
A thoughtful and stellar write, Iris. Your words are an inspiration for all. Wonderful and creative based in the faith they exclaim. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/29/2016 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Dan, for kind and warm words inspiring. May your day be filled with pleasantries.
Date: 1/27/2016 4:29:00 PM
Iris, Congrats on your awesome win. --SKAT--
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:37:00 PM
Thank you dear, but it doesn't fit right form i was told. Peace and love
Date: 1/27/2016 1:33:00 PM
What a wonderful testimony Iris, congratulations on your win. Best wishes from Jean
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:38:00 PM
Thank you my dear, yet i was told it's not the right form.
Date: 1/27/2016 12:10:00 PM
to be persistent and loyal is sweet grace!..congrats iris and huggs
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:43:00 PM
Nette, I so thank you; but I was informed that was wrong form. Peace and blessings.
Date: 1/27/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Iris! :)
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thanks dear, for stopping by with your warmth; but I was told it was the wrong form. Peace and blessings.
Date: 1/27/2016 4:06:00 AM
Iris, I so love this work, I want it higher but.. i'll explain to you in soupmail.... but I so love this poem.. =`) especially the last stanza.. =`) CONGRATULATIONS!!! ~oLIVE eLOISA =`)
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:48:00 PM
Thank you for constructive criticism that's like eye opener. Peace and blessings.
Date: 1/27/2016 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, but I was told it's not the right form. Blessings to you.

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