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Seeing the God Who Sees Me

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Seeing the God Who Sees Me

I was lost, afraid, confused, my life in a mess
Tired, cold, hungry, and thirsty in the wilderness
Depressed, angry, all alone, and ready to die
But the Lord saw my affliction and heard my cry.

He gave me a drink from His ever flowing fount
Promised abundant blessings, too many to count
Therefore I will trust Him and obey His decree
For I have seen the living God who watches me.

Inspired by Genesis 16 where God found the fleeing Hagar in the wilderness.

Copyright © Brent Cloyd

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  1. Date: 1/20/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Thank you. I will try and find your poem

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:49:00 AM
    WoW! What a SUPER write and fine testimony of your faith. I wrote one like this too. It's called "LOST AND FOUND" Great job here my friend. God Bless, JB

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    Date: 1/20/2012 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for yoru comment. I will try and find your poem. Brent
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 10:41:00 PM
    : ) You have a beautiful faith, Brent! Hold on to this priceless gift no matter what! God bless you, always.. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:36:00 PM
    Thanks for your feedback Kim. I have been reading some of your work also. Brent

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 4:56:00 PM
    This is an excellent interpretation of that story. Well done. God Bless! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:52:00 PM
    I have looked and searched for a quite a time, but in god and his followers I've found no inspiration or rhyme.