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Secret Lover

The sullen wind and the rain thundered, and withdrawing my dripping cloak, I let my damp hair fall, going to him, I made my smooth white shoulder bare, my raven hair tangled, I whispered, "I love you" . . . I had come through the night to be with him, he stroked my cheek and wound my hair in his fingers, kissing my throat as I closed my eyes, his lips burned with his love . . . My head, he clasped to his thundering chest, and his tears came falling down, we stayed together all the night long, and still we have not stirred . . . _____________________________ November 11, 2012 Verse Written by Broken Wings Submitted to the contest, Best Romantic Poem, sponsor, Skat Third Place

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  1. Date: 8/26/2015 3:10:00 AM
    Wow...what a beautiful way to say "I Love You". Deserves my 7.

  1. Date: 8/25/2015 10:26:00 PM
    BW, this is very romantic! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

  1. Date: 8/25/2015 7:17:00 PM
    Congrats, Broken, nicely written :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2015 5:59:00 PM
    Enjoyed, congratulations

  1. Date: 8/25/2015 2:40:00 AM
    Wonderful write broken, full of emotive expression! Congrats on big win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2015 10:54:00 PM
    Broken. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:57:00 PM
    just love the magical feel to this, my friend

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:24:00 PM
    You have masterfully created a magnificent and wondrous write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this perfect and majestic poem this evening! What a delightful and gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:14:00 PM
    It really does sound like a wonderful dream. hugs, catie :)