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Secret Love Upon Father's Ear

Twain frolicked through the meadows, thou and I. Beautiful dreams of thee brighten mine very soul. Oh, ill-fated tragedy thou must not forever cry. Mine future hath been locked with thee in a foxhole. I pledged to thee, mine never-ending love. Thy purity shines whiter than any star. Forever shall bind twain my sweet dove. Mine heart remains thine, though thou art far. The secret of mine love hath burned upon father’s ear. Despite mine hope his power hath imprisoned thee. Do not weep, my darling, be thou of good cheer. Until mine dying day, mine heart remains true to thee. Love, thus feigned shall rejoice once again. Mine father, the king thinks only of the monarch. Thus, he hath fought against love's glen. But we twain shall embrace amid roses as loves spark. Beneath his very nose I rally men of strength. Thy rescue planned upon the fortnight. My honor to thee I bestow at every length. For love thus pledged is assuredly right. Thus, when we twain escape unto Denmark, I shall make thee mine proper wife. Abdicating mine throne without remark. Eternity with thee shall be mine happy life. © April 11, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: To thee that I love, adorn and trust (Early Modern English Poetry Contest) Sponsored by: Michael Smith

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Date: 2/8/2013 5:15:00 PM
dane ann, it's lovely to see your poem in a contest here. Never see much of you but I enjoy your work. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/7/2013 2:21:00 PM
i love it Dane, your win!
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Date: 2/7/2013 10:42:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and congratulations, Dane Ann!...how have you been? - Tim
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Date: 2/7/2013 10:10:00 AM
Congrats on your HM xx
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:19:00 PM
Hello Dane. Nice to see you here.... :-) congratulations on your well deserved winning poem. Have yourself a good night* always & forever. P.D.
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