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Below is the poem entitled Seconds which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Seconds form every day swiftly or slowly pass as a droplet of water drips in time
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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 2:52:00 AM
    "Seconds swiftly or slowly pass" It's true. And the droplet goes backward or forward in time? Just a surreal thought - and a reason for you to compose a longer one.

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:05:00 PM
    It's nice and cute. Superb imagination.Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:25:00 AM
    Droplets of wisdom accumulated by time! Superb!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 6:57:00 AM
    This is a wonderful and inspirational write, truly it is a very inspirational poem Sara...I just love the connection between drips of water and time passing, each second as the water drips! There is a Cure song (a group from the 70's and 80's) that has something to do with water dripping and time elapsing! Very clever way to express time moving on by my friend! I really loved reading this piece this poem this morning, Great Work!!