Seconds

Seconds form every day swiftly or slowly pass as a droplet of water drips in time Traditional Cinquain

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/25/2013 12:05:00 PM

It's nice and cute. Superb imagination.Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2013 7:25:00 AM

Droplets of wisdom accumulated by time! Superb!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/25/2013 6:57:00 AM

This is a wonderful and inspirational write, truly it is a very inspirational poem Sara...I just love the connection between drips of water and time passing, each second as the water drips! There is a Cure song (a group from the 70's and 80's) that has something to do with water dripping and time elapsing! Very clever way to express time moving on by my friend! I really loved reading this piece this poem this morning, Great Work!!