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Second Chance at love or just forget it

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Second Chance at love or just forget it

Can this only be the begining of love,
He was perfect in my eyes,
 before he wanted me to change,
whether it was my body or my looks,
 or even the style of my clothes,
 I was too young, 
to realize that he only wanted me 
for one thing
and one thing only,
 and that was to satisfy his lust for the flesh,
But i still loved him,
Even through the betrayal of finding him with a bestfriend,
Who was suppose to never betrayed me,
Even through sacred oatrhes declared since a young age.
 I did not need this misery in my life but i continued to love him,
Until one day I decided to give up on love itself.
I grown cold ,and so distant,
I did not socialize and I had become the outcast in Highschool.
No one wants to date a girl weho is cold remote and distant,
I am bound and determined to find the right lover in my life,
But  who can i ask advice for who is truely my friend 
and will not betray me 
the way my own bestfriend did!!

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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 11:34:00 AM
    Could feel the pain! I hope you get the ultimate love of your life! *hugs*

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Well working backwards I see that my former comment is more appropriate for thsi poem. My advice would be to look here at your own very words. He only wanted you for one thing, then he did not love you, therefore the power of love did not fail, only he failed and your friend failed even more regrettably. The problem is that you did love him, and it will hurt for some time, but maybe your defense against falling in love will give you tme to find the right person that truly loves you, nice work.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:45:00 AM
    I hate him for hurting you the way he did. But the poem was as good as always ;)

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    Date: 7/30/2013 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you know i'll always be there for you.