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Below is the poem entitled SEATED AND CONCEITED which was written by poet Rubie Piquero. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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time goes by
it's oozing on the silent night
where this is the right time to write
those words flowing on my mind

staring at the sky
hoping that life is light
feeling the love of my life
is near and I just had to smile

What makes our life so complicated
where when we think, positive are predicted
but suddenly, those good things was defeated
by the way we woke up, and let it all repeated

I just wanted to be seated and conceited
eating a lot, even became bloated
and if I had a chance, I don't care if I've become a wanted
because this is how the world detected
a bunch of people working, and all was negotiated

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  1. Date: 6/9/2013 7:51:00 PM
    eating a lot even become bloated. gluttony. hahahahaha

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:04:00 AM
    A well composed piece Rubie,well done!