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Seasons of Life

Our lives are like the Seasons, we come and we go. In Spring we are born, then we bloom with beautiful colors. After that comes Summer. We are all grown. We are living our dreams, then we have our own children. Autumn comes next, our children are all grown and have children of their own. Our hair once dark, or bright with color, starts to turn grey. We can now see the change. Last, but not least comes Old Man Winter. He comes to settle a score. He brings cold winds, ice and snow. The trees lose their leaves and a lot of the plants die. He kills everything. Like the last Season, we too must die, so a new generation can come and be born next Spring. The Seasons of life can be beautiful, when we learn to live them right...
10/05/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/23/2013 8:27:00 AM
It is so amazing how similar our poems are. We must have been sharing the same dream....lovely
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Date: 1/18/2013 1:37:00 PM
Hi Lucille. Your poems have a lot of depth. I enjoy the flow of your words and thoughts. Soulful. I'm just beginning my poetry journey. But you have influenced me.
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Date: 10/9/2012 7:54:00 AM
We are no different in our life cycle, than all that inherit this planet, but we do have the power to make a difference, and you do with your wonderful poetry....
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Date: 10/9/2012 6:08:00 AM
Good message, Lucy. God makes our seasons. So does he with us. Love you, Toquyen
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Date: 10/9/2012 12:27:00 AM
Very well said about the seasons of life in your awesome poem, Lucilla. Seasons are like friends (just like the way I've described friends in one of my poems here), they come and go and they always do come and go. EXCELLENT WRITE THIS IS LUCILLA!!! Super love it!!! Thanks for sharing!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:46:00 PM
I'm in my autumn of life, just like it is autumn in my state right now!! Not a bad time. But i sure dread the winter!!! Great message poem!
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:24:00 AM
Excellent read!! Love the flow n message. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/6/2012 5:20:00 PM
Great work..Life is short on this earth but we learn so much through the experience..Sad that we have to leave when we began to see what is most important..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2012 3:22:00 PM
so true Lucilla,when you look at life with this positivity that dying is a part of living,I think we appreciate life more,love every line,wonderful
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Date: 10/6/2012 2:44:00 PM
The cycles of life endless font of poetry Light & Love
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Date: 10/6/2012 2:34:00 PM
Yes, it's a good comparison Lucilla. - Very well written - Have a superbly weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) I see that you too have been visited by Rebbecca Goodluck: block her - she is everywhere with the same message. :(
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Date: 10/6/2012 6:31:00 AM
Well written my dear Lucilla! Sadly your analogy of life and the seasons describes us humans to a 't'... kudos! Love and happy thoughts, Jack
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Date: 10/6/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thoughtful write. Excellent. enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:01:00 PM
Hi Lucy, your poem, and thoughts are excellent. I never compared us to seasons, but now that I've read your poem. I see the comparison in action. Like season's that come and go and change ,,so do we... your ending is a beautiful thought... , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:31:00 PM
Nice comparison of one's lifetime to the seasons within a year's time. Reminds me of a song made famous by Bobby Goldsboro.
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