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Seasons

The trees, Resplendent in their golden glory, Shed their leaves, One by one, Day by day, As autumn and winter tighten their grip. Ice settles, snow falls, Winter is here once more. Animals lay beneath the earth, Upon which we tread, Deep in their slumbers, Awaiting the first buds of spring. Crisp mornings dawn, The virgin snow, Pure and white, Transforms the land before us, From hamlets and villages, To towns and cities, Mother Nature adorns her domain. Reluctant to let go, Winter releases its grasp, Buds swell and festoon the forest with colour, Birdsong fills the skies, Sunlight bathes the trees once more. People emerge, as if from sleep, To tend animals and crops, As the Earth once more enters springtime. A time of life and birth A time of hope and joy, A time of fragility, For winter is never far away.

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Date: 1/1/2014 4:04:00 PM
Rachel, you got that right , winter is never far away... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/1/2014 1:21:00 PM
Powerful write Rachel! I love how you've used the seasons to showcase the vanity of mankind. Through out the changes and modernization from villages to cities, winter is never far behind - life is indeed precious yet so very slippery. Very well written. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
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Date: 12/31/2013 1:37:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Rachel ! - A lovely poem, well done !! :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a lovely day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/31/2013 10:06:00 AM
Hope you enjoy the new years, here at the soup.................... SKAT
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Date: 12/31/2013 10:05:00 AM
Rachel, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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