Seashells

The hiss of the sea, From the hollow of a shell; Soft ocean whispers.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 4/18/2009 12:24:00 PM

The whispers of the ocean lie inside, nicely penned.

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/18/2009 12:00:00 AM

The hiss of the sea. nice job

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2009 8:40:00 PM

What a beautiful poem, Raul! You are so gifted! And I just learned today is your birthday. Wish I could sing "Happy Birthday" to you, but you're probably better off that I can't. (Not a great singer.) But my best wishes go out to a Super Souper, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/5/2009 5:15:00 PM

I like to listen to the whispers of the ocean too, nice work

Belinda Parish

Date: 4/4/2009 11:13:00 PM

Excellent!! Very good Haiku

Josh Torres

Date: 4/4/2009 10:08:00 PM

great hiku dude i have the best hiku righting freind in the world lol >>>josh

Chris Goombi

Date: 4/3/2009 8:34:00 PM

I love to listen to them, great sounds they cast.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 4/3/2009 8:21:00 PM

The hollow of a shell, nice line. You captured the beautiful essence of a seashell. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/3/2009 7:51:00 PM

The whispers of the sea, echoing from a seashell, nice work. Tyler

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/3/2009 4:40:00 PM

I love to put a seashell to my ears and listen to the echoes of the ocean..well done haiku brother.

Date: 4/3/2009 4:19:00 PM

You're spot on with your observations in this poem. When I think of the sounds coming from a shell, whispers is so fitting. Interesting use of this short form. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind comments on my lanterne. Keep on writing! Blessings to you. Karen

Gene Williamson

Date: 4/3/2009 1:43:00 PM

Raul, I like the way the sea speaks to you in this captivating haiku. -gene.