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Searching For God

We keep searching for God Although he's everywhere We want to have proof To prove he is there Look up to the sky The wind is his breath He's the God of the living The master of death The gifter of sunshine Feel his warmth on your face All the trees and plant life Rely on His grace Listen to His laughter When you see children play Humanity His garden He tends to us each day Inspired by Gail Angel Doyle's Finding God Contest. Not entered because like a guy I didn't read the directions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/18/2014 6:21:00 AM
Hello, Richard, I enjoyed your poem about the goodness of God. How true that we can see God in other people and in nature. And I especially love seeing him in sunrises and sunsets. When His light beams down at us saying good morning and good night. (like waking us up and tucking us in. ) So sorry about your attempts at entering a contest. Maybe that was my fate, too, since I thought I entered one, but I have heard zero back! Blessings! Darlene
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/18/2014 9:36:00 AM
You comment is very poetic, I appreciate your visit this morning.
Date: 9/14/2014 2:06:00 PM
Richard, my friend. This one is a standout even though it didn't make the contest... I love it! .... Regards.... Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2014 6:26:00 PM
Thanks so much John.
Date: 8/26/2014 7:25:00 PM
Your poem is profound as the note is funny. Brilliant way to express these feelings. I must tell you that I greatly admire this work of art.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2014 7:38:00 PM
Thanks Isaiah, I know we share a love for our Heavenly Father. Your comment and visit are appreciated.
Date: 8/15/2014 3:16:00 PM
Nice Rick. very nice... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 3:22:00 PM
Thanks once again Verlena.
Date: 8/14/2014 12:01:00 PM
love this one too. glad you didn't read the directions.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 9:19:00 AM
Thanks again Maurice.
Date: 8/12/2014 6:54:00 AM
Your faith is a beautiful thing, Rick. God is in everything and shares our every giggle and every tear.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:52:00 AM
As is yours my dear.
Date: 8/11/2014 9:21:00 PM
God is the source of our Becoming. Your Faith is powerful in poetry and in soul. J.A.B.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Justin, my faith is constantly being reinforced by God's grace and kindness.
Date: 8/10/2014 2:41:00 PM
:) Lovely, Richard. True...He's everywhere...The Master of the UNIVERSE...chooses to live in our hearts. How awesome is that? Hugs...I've missed u
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 6:04:00 PM
You're right it is pretty amazing.
Date: 8/10/2014 1:15:00 PM
beautiful spiritual write Richard. I adore the line 'Look up to the sky The wind is his breath' simply stunning! Love the comment at the end - simple write another poem! Hugs Jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 6:05:00 PM
Hi Jan, I might try another one for the contest if it's not to late.
Date: 8/10/2014 10:24:00 AM
Good, Rick. Concrete examples - I like that!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Toquyen.
Date: 8/10/2014 9:22:00 AM
Ha- love your little side note. this is a beautiful poem Richard xox
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, I really enjoyed yours this morning. I'm off to tennis so I will have to read more later. Thanks for your visits this morning.
Date: 8/10/2014 9:05:00 AM
He is in your wonderful writings Richard. Have a fabulous Sunday......Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Tim
Date: 8/10/2014 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment.

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