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Sea Rest From Labors

Dusky twilight foam. Ever flowing nearing shore. No more suffering. *For Contest

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Date: 2/14/2010 1:59:00 PM

What a wonderful world that would be. Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:51:00 AM

good luck in the contest, made me think!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 7:30:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku ..good luck in the contest as u have captured so perfectly the photo.. I just luv these kinds of contests... should do very well in placing.. u already read my Serenity... good luck again.. HVD again..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda Witt-King

Date: 2/13/2010 11:15:00 PM

You also found the description of the physical led inward. That surprised me in mine. I tried several lines that would continue the description of the photo, but nothing felt complete until I surrendered to the poem's calling. Yours is haunting, Marty. I see the photo in a completely new perspective now.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/13/2010 10:35:00 PM

Dear Marty, YOU are on YOUR game tonight A Winner for sure How quickly YOU climb to the top of the POETRY Ladder YOUR Clever and ingenious Writes INSPIRE GOOD LUCK (as if YOU need it ) in the Contest and Thank-YOU for YOUR continueing Support Of 'End Line Word" Thank-YOU also For YOUR Gracious. Appreciated Comments YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/13/2010 10:04:00 PM

I love Haikus. Good luck in the contest. It is a good one. Ellen

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/13/2010 7:43:00 PM

I love this one, Marty. This is a winner in my book. Gorgeous Haiku! Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.