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Sea of Tears

Feelings, I thought genuine, were merely a bunch of lies. And the memories we've shared only bring tears to my eyes. You easily deceived me as my hopes began to climb. And love slipped through my fingers like the shifting sands of time. You have managed to convert my elation into pain. And your empty promises left me alone once again. Your excuses weighed heavy, like a stone lodged in my heart. Yet, I fell for every word believing we'd never part. In a sea of tears, dreams drown, within the depths of sorrow. And my future's abandoned to the whims of tomorrow. You've convinced me that love is but lust; by another name. And even if my heart heals, I will never feel the same. (Quatrain) 5/17/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:02:00 AM
The mood is this poem is beautifully portrayed. I particularly love the "Your excuses weighed heavy like a stone lodged in my heart. Yet I fell for every word believing we'd never part." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 10:20:00 PM
How hopes are shattered by those that deceive. Sad but beautiful poem. A #7
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Date: 5/18/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate all visits my friend. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 4:46:00 PM
Oh the evil some so willingly and joyfully do to others. Mocking them at times without ever realizing in truth. They themselves are the one that's broken. A 7 my (friend) :) God bless.
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Date: 5/18/2015 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Edwin, I appreciate all of your friendly incisive visits. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 2:42:00 PM
Powerful well constructed poem,what a sad touched. At times trust is dangerous in a relationship, but we all have to trust someone even when someone betrayed us.
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Afolabi, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 2:27:00 PM
deeply moving and pensive like tears from the eyes of a poet whose sensitivity is reflected in her splendid work.. well done, emile!. huggs
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I appreciate all of your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
Oh....such a sad write, Emile. You know how to bring those emotions to the surface and touch the heart of the reader. Very powerful write. It is hard when trust is shattered. Hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2015 2:23:00 PM
Jade, you honor me with such wonderful praise, thank you so much. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful touching poem Emile... poignant and honest... you paint your words with lovely imagery xx~xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I always enjoy a visit from you. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 1:11:00 PM
beautiful imagery Emile but oh so sad - I guess it would be so difficult to trust someone after heartbreak like this:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/17/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thank so much Jan, trust is difficult at the best of times but it's value holds true. Emile.

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