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Sea of Green

I run through the fields of green Feel the wind upon my back Open grass sways beneath my feet Looking for the freedom I seek A smile forms upon rosy lips As eyes drift toward open skies Clouds encased with silver lining As the heaven's above appear shining The sun roams across the open sky As shadows dance within my view Floating like a butterfly in a sea of green I walk across this field of dreams. 6/27/15

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Date: 7/3/2015 10:46:00 AM
I particularly like this write dear poet for this reason: although I do picture you running and in complete ecstacy, I too can insert myself and vission only myself in this wonderful array of beauty and glistening thought ! Nice ! have a great 4th Phyllis....much love, james
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2015 11:29:00 AM
Will comment again as the last comment disappeared so if you get two you know why. Thanks James and yes this gal with her knee cannot run thru those fields of green. Wishful thinking. lol Have a happy 4th James. love phyl
Date: 7/2/2015 7:49:00 PM
I love this dream you walk across from. A lovely poem, enjoyed the vision. LINDA
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2015 11:25:00 AM
Hi Linda and glad you enjoyed my words. It has been a while since I felt like writing again lost my muse this past year.
Date: 6/30/2015 3:40:00 PM
- Sounds delicious ..... soft and lovely poem dear Phyllis - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2015 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise for reading my poems as I write them. You are a gem. love phyl
Date: 6/27/2015 8:41:00 PM
A lovely, carefree poem, Phyllis! I like it! Love, Kim
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Kim for reading my poem. Nice to also have you on fb. love phyl

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