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The skies become loud and dark Raining bombs upon us May god protect the civilians Take away the rest in rivers red Let the devils blood flow far from us We stare always to the skies Our own tears falling Thus we created our own sea of dreams Here inside our prison city Laughter is hidden underneath the bed My pink lip stick and smile I have only hope to eat I have only the future to grasp Because my death shall soon come to be Death for forgetting the past All we could do, living in daily fear Is swim in our sea of dreams Only to be drowned with our own blood Here is my Photo, here is my dream I lie dead, my dream I leave to you Dedicated to Nisan Ibrahim who reported and wrote under the alias Ruqia Hassan. She lived in the city of Raqqa in Iraq and was killed by Daesh around July 2015. Hassan came from a Kurdish family that was originally from the town of Kobane, Syria, on the Turkish border. The family had at some date relocated to Raqqa. She was never to find that rest and peace. Maybe she didn't expect to. She wrote the same day: "Our biggest mistake was to swim in a sea of dreams... and we dreamt of the next phase and ignored the current phase... we look at the future and forgot the past... #a mistake we regret."

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Date: 1/30/2016 12:47:00 PM
Excellent pen Arthur! A beautiful tribute to Nisan Ibrahin! And thank you for visiting my page. Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:) D.
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Date: 1/13/2016 9:51:00 AM
Dear Arthur Well I'm back dear friend needed to get my inspiration back on and take care of some family business, but I'm ready to take on the world once more, tonight I will be writing again just waiting to take care of two things and I'm all on it again, here on this wonderful place called poetry soup, lol hope this comment finds you my friend well and happy, and I am looking forward to sharing this new year with you and the others here, cheri
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Date: 1/13/2016 9:44:00 AM
Dear Arthur You my friend always write such wonderful pieces my friend, and this is know exception, loved the story and every line, all I can say is Wow what a wonderful tribute to this lost souls of the dreaming city of a better future, just to be lost, it is a sad reality, but in yet maybe in another way she found a paradise on the other side beyond, I'll hope she has my dear friend but I'm sure she is smile somewhere smiling down upon you now, and she knows how much you care, cheri
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:57:00 PM
Arthur, great tribute to a beautiful young woman. So much pain to endure by so many. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:01:00 PM
this makes my heart clench, arthur.. such a riveting work so wrenchingly, beautifully done.. huggs
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:00:00 PM
We are all victims of fate. Whichever path we take will eventually lead to the destined end. An excellent poem, Arthur; will peace always remain a dream? // paul
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:35:00 AM
so sad
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:49:00 AM
triste
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:47:00 PM
oh arthur, this is so sad. But what COULD she have done. I doubt that she could have done a thing to have changed her fate. That poor beautiful woman. I love your empathetic nature.
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Date: 1/8/2016 6:11:00 AM
BRAVO Arthur! An exceptional piece... we are indeed doomed to repeat history if we forget it. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/8/2016 2:11:00 AM
A wonderful tribute Arthur - you tackle subjects other people shy away from Kudos to you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2016 1:18:00 AM
A very beautiful tribute, Arthur. Your talent shines bright here. A well written piece story with a tragic end touched this reader so much I'm welling up... Great write!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2016 10:51:00 PM
Than you Kim you are so kind!
Date: 1/7/2016 11:32:00 PM
That is great quote from her. A fabulous tribute Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/22/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Tim, :)
Date: 1/7/2016 8:44:00 PM
This is a heartbreaking poem my friend , so deep and touchy , but though very strong and beautiful , you've touched my soul , I give it a 7 , hugs / / :) dalia
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/7/2016 9:07:00 PM
This is so kind of you, and yes a very sad story.
Date: 1/7/2016 7:31:00 PM
This brings tears to my eyes.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/7/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Cas, yes a very sad story indeed!

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