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Sea Change

Starfish hands splaying within, playing in my heart's harbour; a tiny mollusc, rocking in my body's boat. You sailed from my skin; loosed from my womb's safe mooring, the port of my arms; adrift, receding from reach on my heartbreak horizon.
written in memory (dodoitsu and tanka forms used)

Copyright © Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 6:34:00 AM
    a white package was found to day stuffed inside my door. for a moment i wondered what could this be for. and then i saw the postcards, the pictures of my home over there. and stones to put in our fish tank, at first i wondered where. and a letter written in her hand. to me this means so much. for unto us who love from afar this is the way we touch.

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    Date: 5/18/2012 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hopefully they help to bridge the gulf of long distance love x
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Your wording brings forth so much emotion. Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Charlotte! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:42:00 AM
    Dear Charlotte, truely wonderful!!! Congratulations on your win!! big huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:53:00 PM
    I know there is a story here. Congratulations Charlotte on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:36:00 PM
    Ah yes motherhood..skillfully written with unique imagery! Congrad's on your win Light & love

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on your special win enjoyed your poem hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:45:00 AM
    congrats Charlotte on a superb win for this brilliant mesh of forms for Russell..luv.. always fine..

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 10:08:00 PM
    hmmm, I"ve clicked on ten poems and can't seem to find one of yours I've not seen. So once again, I LOVE this one and hope it does well in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Lovely write Charlotte....Great metaphors Enjoyed reading this. Love, Jon

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 2:13:00 AM
    What stark imagery you've painted here, Charlotte! I really like your metaphors here, very unique and that ending "heartbreak horizon" is really good! Btw, it's so great to see your pretty self in your avatar! I love your hair! :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Like this Charlotte, it is different, and very poetic. good luck inb contest. harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Smile ˜ I Completely Agree With Beautiful Andrea & Beautiful Vienna In That Your Own Magnificent Beauty Is Quite Gifted & Absolutely Amazing ˜ My Sweeet Love, Always & Forever, John!:) *

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 8:13:00 PM
    wowowow, you never cease to amaze me with your creativity, Charlotte. THis deserves a BIG win.

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Every word placed so perfectly to achieve likeness of sea and soul. Loved it Charlotte, best wishes for a win. hugs,vie