Sea

I akin to your scrutiny, Gawking back at me So strikingly Blue

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Date: 6/18/2009 5:32:00 PM

Interesting reflection in this concise poem. Love that blue water--gives me a sense of peace. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! Best wishes with your writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 4:46:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Sajdah>James

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/8/2009 10:37:00 AM

Nice Tribute To The Sea. Even Such Simple Words Can Bring A Picture Of A Clear Sea To Mind.

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/25/2009 2:18:00 PM

Very delicate language, I like it; primitive image combined with academic talk, cool! Thanks for the experience:D

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/24/2009 11:49:00 AM

Brilliant write my friend! Wonderfully done! Laura :) Welcome to poetry-soup! Laura :)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/22/2009 9:07:00 AM

I love this ... some there contemplating the giant ... I feel its power like I feel this write, love and peace, my friend

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/19/2009 7:28:00 PM

great write. I've visited the pacific and atlantic and both are beautiful shades of blue.... good job! ( I ' ve left you some soup mail)

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 10:00:00 AM

You carry imagery and meaning with the same power ... the sunami of your words.