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Scuba Diving

Scuba Diving Heavy SCUBA tanks As if flying in water Everywhere blue Dry mouth icky salt Regulator gets knocked out Can't breathe in water See a shark hiding Marveling in its stealth Hope it's not hungry Running our of air Better get to boat fast Stupid lungs why why? Brightly colored fish And coral everywhere I wish I could stay

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:41:00 PM
    Hi Merideth....This is a fantastic contemporary haiku from the first set to the last! I went scuba diving with you momentarily and it was a blast! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 9:50:00 AM
    A delightful write.Enjoyed.Thanks for reading my poem and commenting.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Personally, I love going to the Caribbean - but I have never gone scuba diving. Welcome to the "Soup" and keep up the fine poetry! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 5:00:00 PM
    This was a pleasant poem Meredith. -oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:52:00 PM
    Ha, how nice, and I can imagine how beautiful it must be, I enjoyed reading your poetry tonight, Greg