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Thought that you would be mine
So I waited for a long time
You were with her in a couple of years
And break up as my tears disappear.

At last my waiting is done 
Now, you and I will be one 
We can build up great love with each other 
And be together sooner or later.

The evening I’ve waited has began
You and I are together as one 
Dance the night ‘till tomorrow never comes
And hold each others hands until dawn has come.

Now that we’re together
I thought you’re in love with me forever 
But it’s like feather in the wind
You’ll love me now and forget me later.

And now that you left me without a goodbye 
My world falls apart, I think I’m gonna die
My heart has been wounded by your love
I think it would heal but it’ll have a scar.

Our memories together brought me happiness
My heart has loved you without a rest
And even now that we may be apart
I think I shall move on but I’ll never say goodbye.

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  1. Date: 7/22/2008 9:46:00 AM
    I loved the message at the end of this poem - far to often people let go of the friendship along with the love - blessings to your beautiful heart