Savior
Savior, Mighty One, Loving Son.
You gave your life for freedom's sake.
I'm thankful for your sacrifice.
Note: I am just playing with ideas on forms of poetry. This is my first ever attempt
at anything like an haiku. Hope it's decent... I am not sure how to judge this form
of poetry - so any feedback is good.
Copyright © Louise Picek | Year Posted 2007
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