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Savin' Sunshine

Sitting here over coffee warn thoughts like smoke filter slowly cross my mind. Thinking of you dear wish you were here. Savin' sunshine darlin' for some sunless day, neatly filed darlin' under "S" for stay.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2015 10:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win!!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/2/2015 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Robert

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Dave :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 5:31:00 PM

Thanks Laura

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2015 1:41:00 PM

Very nice short and sweet write Dave :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Casarah

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 4:15:00 AM

Beautifully penned dave many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:47:00 AM

Dave, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:04:00 AM

Dave, that is amazing.... Congratulations... PD

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Lee Carter

Date: 7/30/2015 1:05:00 AM

Super sweet! Congrats on your win Dave. ~lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2015 12:09:00 AM

oh my, I have to tell you that at first, I went to google to find out what Savin meant. (it's a red oak tree) and then I realized you meant savin', right? Too bad the title probably does not let you write it that way, but I wish you had used savin' inside the text. That would have made it better I think. Darlin' too! This was very cute. Congrats for the win.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/30/2015 3:06:00 PM

Guilty as charged, you're right as always my pedantic friend. http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/59653/ing-vs-in-ending And thank you for your contest.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 12:08:00 AM

Lovely Dave! What a subtle beauty u hv penned here,Congrats on ur win!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 7/23/2015 11:34:00 AM

Savon must radiate in your eyes, beautiful :), jill

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/23/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thanks Jill