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warm tears fall from my weakened eyes to the tathered ground as my ears begain to silence the sound shadows of evil surround my presents as spirits of light fall in my essence my brother.... my brother.... your nearing the light just try to repent and continue your fight as the paster raise my hands in this joyous occasion i felt the spirits of darkness evasion the invasion of my lord enter my personal equation now what is going to be my ceremonial occasion? my eyes begain to brighten i am no longer lost as the city of fallen angels start to pay their own cost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2009 1:27:00 AM
Like the inner poem in th first couplet Tevin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/11/2009 1:06:00 PM
You are indeed writing your heart and soul out here, and so beautifully at that. Welcome to PoetrySoup and may you continue to find lighter and brighter days. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/10/2009 1:23:00 PM
Finding the light of faith is truly an amazing gift. Blessing to you for sharing this story with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/10/2009 10:37:00 AM
He is good!
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:56:00 AM
A multitude of Angels rejoice over one sinner saved. Welcome Tevin A great testimony may God use you in a mighty way. Have a wonderful Easter Brother Keep Praising. Leon ps Great surname
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:48:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup Tevin. I hope you enjoy your stay. Nice couplet by the way...Raul
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Date: 4/9/2009 9:04:00 PM
true story
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