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Save Me a Seat

Save me a seat in the front row. Your in heaven now and God puts on a hell of a show. There is no admission but leave your pain at the front door. Just like Poe's raven who repeats "Nevermore." Go ahead and put on those silly glasses it's all in 3-D. Even though your vision's will be quite different than me. In your movie, you will see your good and I guess your bad. All the happiness and everything sad. From the previews it shows your life from birth until death. I'm told from your first cry until your last breath. There will be no subtitles or audio to adjust. The only words that appear is like on a coin stamped "In God we trust." I don't remember it's in either scene one or scene two. Out comes your family and friends that have passed before you. Stop, end this movie you scream. I do not like this that person. I do not this show. Patience, Patience the director replies. All is forgiven. That is why I put you in the front row.

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Date: 2/23/2016 7:22:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Tammy - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:01:00 AM
You're a great story teller Tammy! I really love your style!
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Date: 2/21/2016 5:13:00 PM
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:25:00 PM
Tammy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2016 12:39:00 AM
interesting couplet, Tammy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tammy Mccown
Date: 2/20/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank-you Linda. Looking forward to meeting new friends and know that all poets are compassionate people and who doesn't need more ppl like this in their life.

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