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Save Me

It’s hard to live
In this sea of distress
Sorrow comes
And pulls me under
Fighting for my
Very last breath
I’m struggling
Can you save me?
Way too late
I’m drowning
In the light
It’s time for
Me to leave
But if you came 
And pulled me out
Of this quicksand:
I might have lived
I might be here

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Gabby lets hope you are still here to write great words like this..David