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Your wings are beating, Your claws are dug in, But my urge is fleeting - Doubt sits on my skin. Now I ask you sincere, “Why are we still here?” What was a simple Black and white time Now bears shaded dimple That ripples my feel And crumbles my belief That our together appeal Will grant either heart relief. Let us pass on by This physical attraction. Let us bear in mind Our logical reaction. Later, years from now, Should I think of you, I will know satisfaction Recalling nothing happened. ... CayCay Jennings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/1/2015 1:05:00 AM
Excellent poem - well done. Julia, xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 1:08:00 AM
I thank you, Julia - especially for taking the time to comment ... CayCay
Date: 9/29/2015 1:43:00 PM
very true if its just physical then its not going anywhere. my fav line "Now bears shaded dimple"
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Date: 10/1/2015 1:08:00 AM
Hey, Poetess - thank you again for reading and sharing your reaction to one of my writes ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 1:48:00 PM
Chemistry gone. Hurts the love between two. How do you rekindle a dying amber? If you can't it hurts both parties. Love the truth in this one CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:36:00 PM
Hi, Michael - thank you for the feedback. I hope all is well and creative in your world ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 1:16:00 PM
Wow...you brought this home with a powerful punch, CayCay. Good write....and yes. There is truth there that I can relate to. Hugs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:31:00 PM
I want to hand this one out to every teenage girl. As much as I dislike blanket statements, I think the poem may be more relevant to females. I base this on my Tim's comments. Seems he believes you get it when you can - laugh and shake the head ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 12:20:00 PM
I've been there, some people are bad news. As always very muchly enjoyed
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:35:00 PM
People of bad news can give one the blues! Glad you enjoyed it ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 11:33:00 AM
Hmmm... this rhymes with a wounded heart that craves for satisfaction from staying apart from the trials of time.
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hmmmm, indeed. I have a feeling it may be more of a female read. Is that comment going to get me in trouble? Maybe my comment speaks volumes about me! Thanks for your appreciated feedback, Miraj - I like your visits ... CayCay

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