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Satiated In Morning Sun

. A fushia in bloom tempts a thirsty visitor I sip my coffee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku and a lovely way to enjoy the sip of coffee. Great write my friend to enjoy fushia in bloom with coffee. Good luck for the contest with my best wishes and love...Ravindra..xx Carrie Richards
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Date: 4/30/2010 5:04:00 AM
This reminds me of sitting outside on the terrace and having a look to the garden in bloom when having afternoon coffee! Nicely written Haiku, Carrie! And thank you for your comments. Have a nice weekend...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/26/2010 4:39:00 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:14:00 PM
I love this, it takes me back, to me and my Mom, watching her garden and sipping our cafe..love constance
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:36:00 PM
enjoyed--morning pleasures
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:46:00 AM
very nice you write lovely haikus enjoyed tnanks for your always so kind comments have a great day faleshia
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Date: 4/26/2010 9:48:00 AM
well done on the haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2010 9:14:00 AM
A perfect sunny morning , Haiku , Carrie . This IS a true haiku moment , so well done ...
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