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So sick, ashamed, tuke-deh-blaim guilty And tired of your sarcastic comments that tease me on purpose Really not an accidental thing in the first place Crazy talk I do on a daily basis Aggravated beyond reason and logic and behind-closed-pupils emotions So afraid to change my mind about breaking up with you and making the mistake of going back together with you Totally an incomplete work of art from the start...I adored you, Seth Art from the heart...but I'm torn apart - we are opposite isles at Walmart I claimed and nurtured caring, affectionate sayings and lines of endless blessings and miracles that ended up being cursed and obstacles Clever, but a deceiver...looks are awfully appealing, but what's in the inside are a billion books...left unread and left for dead instead...left on the literature bed, molding and rusting in pangs of dread that piles up in my head like debt overhead Chillin like a villain with a tranquil mindset for a change Oh my word, I will forgive the words you uttered and will utter ASAP Mesmerized by your love that is for naught Messed-up in the head mentally and emotionally...happiness and joy, like weeds that were once delight dandelions, distraughtly rot and remotely fought...a frenzied, fired-up fraught as an aftershock of oblivion's ignorance Elegance turn to hideous results, unless you turn that around by mere coincidence altogether, which will most likely not happen, knowing you very rebellious and an uncompromising, headstrong head that is robust - but, break, it must Never flawless and willing it all away...these thunder and rain bolts Truly, you better not shoot me down or I'll bite the bullet and rip up that gown of galore glory and gracious glamor displayed dazzlingly, non-drastically projected on screens of hope strings that won't snap off by the single snip of the sensuous, shapeless scissors Sanity's lines come into play the moment the insanity lies on the paper and not on my scraggly soul again...refrain from pouring your vermillion drizzle upon us and naturally, slip inside the same bumpy, rowdy bus with us for a time...there's no need to hide, subside, cuss or fuss

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Date: 1/2/2016 4:25:00 PM
Such a powerful acrostic and I love the alliteration David:-) hugs Jan xx
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