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Santa In Red

Santa in red Santa in deep red, Emerges from snowy peaks, Reindeer and the sleigh, Bells ring and the carols sing, Forgets the gifts of Christmas ! Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written December 4th, 2014 Contest 'What's up with Santa' by Jerry T Curtis Awarded HM

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Date: 12/11/2014 12:15:00 PM
Forgot the gifts???? Sounds like something I'd do. Congratulations on your win with this great poem Dr. Sharma
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:07:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:38:00 PM
Oh my, Santa forgetting the gifts. Nice one Upma, good luck in the contest, James :)
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:50:00 AM
Forgets the gifts? What's Up With Santa? Oh wait a minute that's the point of this challenge. That's great.
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:45:00 PM
I loved this, not sure if you meant it that way, but forgetting the gifts, well thats the true meaning after all! hugs
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:09:00 AM
Good uck in the contest my friend love this poems festive content, cheri
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:11:00 AM
very enjoyable poem Dr Upma gl in contest hugs
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Date: 12/4/2014 3:18:00 PM
I love the twist ending...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/4/2014 12:45:00 PM
what a surprise in the end, dr .upma... Ii like the cheery feel of this piece... finely done!,, hugggs
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:25:00 AM
This made me smile - good luck Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xx
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