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Sandy Saves Dandy Randy

There was an old codger named Randy Who rolled on the beach and got sandy. T'was there he did sleep, And ne'er did he weep, So sure that his life was just dandy. Along came a lady named Sandy Who wanted so much to help Randy To soften his heart, She played a big part, And stopped him from drinking his brandy. Then Randy got quickly awake, So stunned when he saw his mistake. He thought no one cared Because no one dared To love him for his own name's sake. He quickly got up from his stupor And started to be a good trooper. He went to help others Who didn’t have mothers, and now his life's work is just super. Revised: January 8, 2016

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Date: 9/3/2018 8:14:00 PM
Hello Susan … a well written verse in limerick style; good rhymes; and a pleasure to read a feel good story that adds a chuckle - thank you Susan - Lindsay
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:54:00 AM
Made me laugh, fun to read!
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Date: 3/23/2016 4:36:00 PM
great string of limericks - I love writing this form of poetry too:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2016 1:51:00 PM
Very good, thanks for sharing some laughs with me :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:39:00 PM
Good one Susan!
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:17:00 PM
Susan, if we ever have a contest for "The Limerick Queen of the Soup" you will definitely get my vote. This is great stuff and I loved every line of it. While I have always been a big fan of limericks, most of those I remember from my youth I wouldn't dare use in mixed company back then. Guess it wouldn't mean much these days, though.
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